Form of Being: Auditions Closed; Under Review
Drawmicon for Jake Ramirez
Jake Ramirez (Early 20s)
Werewolf, Filipino American
(AFAB) Trans, He/They, Demisexual, Panromantic
Somewhat nervous, big heart, kind, fumbles with words when flustered
[Thoughtful] Yeah, I guess so. What about you? Do you prefer being around people, or do you prefer to be alone? Not, like, “lonely”. But just doing your own thing, you know?
[Flustered] What? What am I supposed to say? I don’t know anything about fashion!
Oh, yeah, Jaga is Blaire’s girlfriend. I think. Blaire kind of mentioned in passing that they are dating, but they’re in a...queer platonic relationship, I guess? Which is, like, you’re friends, right? But also kind of dating? And also not? I don’t know, I’ve never heard of it before, so I don’t completely understand, but as long as they’re both happy, I don’t really have to, you know? That does sound pretty cool, though. I think if I date someone, it’s gotta be someone I know really well and can connect with as, like, a best friend, you know?
...Uh, um, not that, like, I have anyone like that in mind r-right now, it’s just. It’s just something, uh, I think about when making, like, OkeeDoke (pronounced Oh-Key-Doh-ck) Dating profiles and stuff, haha. Which I have. And am. Using.
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Anyway.
Hey, Drawmicon! This audition sounds great! I can hear you well and your audio is very clean. I think some lines were spoken a little bit fast, but I could also see that read as the character being nervous, so while it doesn't take anything away from this audition, I just wanted mention slowing down line delivery might be a helpful tip! But, if that was intentional for the character, feel free to ignore that suggestion, lol. Overall, I really enjoyed this submission! Thank you so much for your time, I'll keep you updated as the project develops. =)
Thanks for the feedback. I just kept getting lines wrong and that made me start rushing myself more after each try. Although I realize the irony of me trying not to mix up my words, while also talking faster lol
That makes total sense. I've had some lines I read that I messed up and just kind of...tried to incorporate it? xD From my experience, it's been pretty hit or miss, lol. But, yeah! I still think this was a great audition and I appreciate your time and effort. ^-^ If I can think of anything else to suggest, I'll let you know, but I think overall it sounds like you have a good recording set up that ends up with clean and easy to hear submissions. Oh, if you have any questions about this project as well, please feel free to ask. I'm happy to help in any way I can!
Thank you, I appreciate your help!