This is pretty good. The first line, I should've said "angry" instead of "smug". I will also add in that he's pretty angry throughout the whole thing. He's got that "I'm gonna kill them" mindset coursing through him, if you know what I mean.
I can defiantly do a retake if needed! Thank you for the input!
Yeah, that'd be great! Basically, just really sound like you're seconds away from blowing someone up... Oh, I also updated the words in the first line, so might want to account for that.