EC:Monster-Training [An Original Fiction Podcast]
erpendle47 for Rafa Vedos
- RULE-FOLLOWER
- FAMILY-ORIENTATED
- Awkward turtle
- Acts older than he is
acts melancholy/solemn/mature for his age— of course, some people tease them about it!
- His vibe: Calming soul, steadfast and manners are wonderful. kind heart though and humble and funnily enough, he's an awkward turtle
RAFA: I'm going to the store! Anything else, besides what's on the list?
(Please only say Margo's lines for this dialogue. Use the other lines to provide context. Do not leave long pauses in between your dialogue.)
RAFA'S MOM: Stay safe! (worried) Please!RAFA: Of course. (internally) You've been worrying ever since I got my tamed stitch. You act if I just passed the Monster Eval yesterday...
(out loud) I can go to the store, y'know. I won't get in any trouble. It's been a while since I've been ten.
RAFA'S MOM: Don't criticize me about being too careful! You never know what will happen. So much can happen...
RAFA: (soft) Sorry. Bye Mom.
Nice work! You definitely got that frustration. Though you rushed a little bit. I suggest slowing down a bit and taking time with your lines. Make sense of them. Thank you so much for audition ! :D
Thank you for your comment. Sorry I uploaded my audition twice, it just didn’t look like it went through the first time. I will definitely try and slow things down in the future.
You've got great potential in you! I can see it. Can't wait to see more of your work in the future! :D