Casting Call for Fanfic Reading - Under A Luminous Sky
Xanthe Kingsman for Fluttershy
It's Fluttershy. Yay!
“Well, Angel, that was the last patient for the day, I think.” She looked down at the white bunny at her hooves. “Now, how about we go make some carrot stew?”
Context: Uh... she just finished treating the last patient of the day. Just what is says on the tin!
“W-We had just finished with t-t-the last patient when A—Angel f-fell down and started screaming. He... He c-changed and attacked me. Oh, I know he didn’t m-m-mean to! It must have been... h-her...”
Context: Angel Bunny was transformed into a massive, hulking monster. Fluttershy is telling Twilight what happened after she stopped Agent Bentgrass from killing the monster.
“Poor Angel feels just awful about what happened. t wasn’t his fault, though! That evil pony was controlling him! He said it was like a voice shouting in his head, forcing him to do terrible things.”
Context: In the final chapter, Angel Bunny's mind has returned and he is no longer being controlled... but he's still a giant, hulking monster. Fluttershy is trying to convince the girls that he's no longer a threat.
If you're open for a bit of constructive criticism, you've done an amazing job with the voice and inflections, but I think you need a bit more practice burying your accent. I struggled with that when I first became a broadcaster, as my Texas accent is pretty thick normally, and I sounded like the news as reported by King of the Hill! What helped me was identifying words where it was most noticeable, like "there," "understand," and the like, and just slowly repeating those words over and over until I could get them out right. Still, great job with all of these! ^_^