Aura City (Original Animation)
EquiinoX for Halton
Halton is an awkward, quiet-mannered teen with good intentions. When he was 10 his father died under mysterious circumstances, leaving him and his mom alone to fend for themselves. He's fairly friendly but sometimes has a temper when it comes to his father. He has social anxiety issues. Now a freshman in high school, Halton is determined to uncover the secrets of his Father's business.
Voice Range - Medium/High
(Happy) Awh, Mom, we had so much fun today. They showed me some cool tricks and- and we skated around the park 'til the sun set. And now I get to come home to tacos! Man I love it here!
(Angry, Yelling) Why can't I even know my own father?! Nobody tells me anything about him!
Oh um... Hi I'm Halton. I, um, just moved here with my mom. I don't know what makes me unique but...my mom works at a bank, and my dad works-uh- I mean-- worked at BioNeu.
If it's feedbackthat you want, it's feedback that you'll get. The first line that you submitted sounds great, but maybe make it a bit more emotional. I imagine Halton as being tired from having a great day, but still overjoyed. Also, which mic do you use? Or are you using software? I'm getting some ugly feedback on my mic whenevre I yell. I use a HyperX Quadcast, so I think that I should be using some software.
Thanks for the feedback! As for my gear, I use an MXL 990 with a FocusRite Scarlett Solo interface. Only software used is Audacity~