Superheroine Fantasy Narration
LenaPurtu for Narrator (3rd person)
While the POV is third person, narrator should still convey the amazement and wonderment of the title character (see second example above) as she becomes super as uses her powers.
As Lily retreated back into their bathroom, Chloe looked down disappointingly at the red 'S' draped limply over her chest. It wasn't THAT long ago that Chloe and Lily used to share and exchange bikini tops at summer camps. But there had been some significant changes in the past four months since Lily left for early summer enrollment. But over those two semesters, Lily began working out and eating healthier…not to mention she apparently had been visited by the Va-Voom Fairy! The resulting by-product was a new and improved Lily who was 20 pounds lighter and now sporting a glorious silhouette that was normally reserved for lingerie or swimsuit mannequins.
Pinching the material of her costume, Chloe even noticed the fabric was somehow magically changed. The texture and elasticity felt like nothing she had ever seen, definitely not the materials she had used. Pulling it from her midsection, the material creaked sexily as Chloe's superstrong fingers slowly pulled it away from her unbeknownst with thousands of pounds of force. Letting it go, a sharp report rang out like a gun shot echoing through the valley as the costume snapped back violently against her invulnerable tummy with deadly concussive force. Chloe simply giggled. It tickled.
Sweeping her hands over her super new curves, Chloe's hyper-enhanced sense of sensation detected hundreds of steel-hard little indentations and bumps over her body. Muscles! Wonderful, sleek, sexy, lithe muscles had sprouted all over her body -- her arms, shoulders, tummy, legs -- all in the perfect places with the perfect subtle proportions, enhancing the sexiness of her body to the Nth degree.
While it seemed like an impossible feat, it was effortless to Chloe. Everything seemed like that now, thanks to these wonderful powers. Chloe used to be a nobody, but now nobody was like her. As she clenched her fists, her assailant's eyes widened in fear as Chloe's tiny hands bore down on the pool balls, cracking each of them like empty eggshells. As she wrung her fingers, her superhuman digits pulverized and crushed the balls into a course powder as it ran through her fingers and fell onto the floor like fine sand.