Enchanted Academy Recasting (A Minecraft Roleplay)
Vert for Hugo Markey
Age: 27 (17 in flashbacks)
Magic Type: Takes People’s Magic
Voice: Medium-High Adult Male Voice
Personality: He’s a bit of a scaredy-cat but doesn't want anyone to get hurt because of him.
Other Notes: Hugo has only a few lines in the main series but in the wrap-up series his character grows to be a lead. Even with his lack of lines in the main series his character looms over the plot with mentions of the power to take other's magic threatening the characters. He spends most of the main series locked in Smoke's dungeon, being used to his pleasing until later he gets broken out and is able to help stop Smoke. In the Wrap-up series he helps to train Frost how to control his new magic and becomes sort of a mentor for him.
EP #: 15
(To Ana, you last saw her when she was 8 and you 17)
Uh yeah... I can't believe how tall you are. How old are you now, Ana?(Arguing with Principal Lockwood in the past [You are 17]) That's not the same! I'm the one that Smoke wants! It's my fault he did what he did!
(Scared) I know you won't kill me. You need me.*Scream, you are being torched off screen*
The delivery of the lines in this is good! As constructive criticism, the first line it sounds like you move backwards from your mic and then closer to your mic, so keeping your mic at the same distance at all times would be good and your scream isn't bad but it sounds more like your struggling against something then being in pain. The audition overall is pretty good. You do however sound way younger the Hugo is, so realistically even with the good delivery I'm not going to cast you for this part but you do have a good chance of getting Leo. Thank you for your audition!
Ok, thank you for telling me what was wrong and what I can work on.