Team X: Rejected Villains

ismelindsey for Redstrike

Voice Actor
Voice Actor
Redstrike
closed
Unpaid
Role assigned to: mippa

She's a renegade heroine, a bit snarky and not taking anything seriously. 

Keep in mind before auditioning, there is foul language with her part. 

  • Uhh... first- I didn’t exactly fall for your trap, you just shot me in the back with a tranq dart and threw me in here. Second...whatever tranquilizer was that, I want some more of that. Third- I’m not with Team X.

  • (Incredibly angry, shouting)
     OH MY GOD! SHUT UP!

  • (Shaking her head, incredibly annoyed, under her breath)

    Ah hell... this is gonna piss me off. Just smile and nod Red... save the temper for the fight...

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ismelindsey
Team X: Rejected Villains
ismelindsey
ismelindsey

Please critique mine.

Benjamin Tuttle
Benjamin Tuttle

I like the first line, but I feel there needs to be more energy into the part. The part requires a lot of emotion, when she screams 'OH MY GOD! SHUT UP!' Really do it and let it out. She's mad as hell... 'Ah hell... this is gonna piss me off. Just smile and nod Red... save the temper for the fight...' She's holding back her anger and trying not to blow up, but it eventually just fails at the end. I need more emotion and take it slow at that line. It's like you are pissed to a point and you're trying to calm yourself down before you do something horrible.

    ismelindsey
    ismelindsey

    Thanks so much. Im new so I really like getting advice.

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