The White Witch
johnlewise for Brice Howard (altered)
Has a possitvie masculine sounding voice most the time.
That's better. Kill or be killed! That's how the world should be. The stronger should always be on top! And the weak there for the kill. (Excited, but not too fast)
Done talking? Let's not fight, you know how tiring it is? (Lazily)
Come on Arthur you know you want to! (giddie)
I would rather have a word of constructive criticism than a book of praise, so please let me know where I fall short and how I can deliver a better character.
Add more enthusiasm. Give a 2 second pause before restarting a line or starting a new line, otherwise good performance.
Thank you for the advice! I appreciate it! I think I can manage that. a little more character motivation would be nice, but I guess that's the hard part of auditions, right?
For the most part yeah it is.