Thank you for your audition first of all and following my instructions :) I genuinely appreciate that. Now to your feedback. You have a good voice but I feel like you're a bit short of breath on several parts, it sounds like you're breathing through your throat instead of your diaphragm, and as such, you have trouble holding long vowels. Try practicing by breathing deeply for an entire minute, nothing else, then inspire and time how long you can hold a single vowel without stopping. If you reach a minute and a half, you'll have great control over your voice and the rythm of the song. Take also more time to listen and getting familiar with the notes to create a constant harmony through your singing. There's a few points where you abruptely change your intonation and tone of voice. Your transitions must be built in anticipation to arrive naturally, always dedicate a part of your mind towards what comes next. :) One last part, you mixed the music a bit too loud and it entirely covers up your voice sometimes, watch out for that. Thank you again for your audition.