Quest Friends: Loell's Memory
ElAbroVA for Commander TJ (he/him) [Age: 20s-40s]
The leader of the Angulan Knights who is a mix between a frat boy and a drill sergeant. He’s either yelling at you or laughing at mean-spirited “jokes,” likely both. (70 lines)
You see that Marv? You’ve gotta put your biceps into a proper door knock. But I suppose you need ‘em first, am I right?
What the hell kind of legendary knight is named “Loell?” (Scoffs) LO-ELL. You might as well stick with lamb-chop in that case; it won’t make history, but it’ll make a good snack! But we aren’t snacks, are we, knights!?
You did well on the mission today but you gotta learn your place in the pecking order, chickadee. We can only help the weak if there’s respect and discipline and fraternity within our organization, you got that? Don’t mess with me.
I really liked the voice you chose for TJ, and one area I would try playing around with in the future is varying your inflections more. A lot of the lines were read well, but had the same tone pretty much the whole way through, where a bombastic character like TJ would likely have very high highs and very low lows. You picked a fun voice, but I think this audition would've been even better if you had a more distinct cadence, too.
Solid feedback! I will defnitely be working on this in the future and try to fine tune my inflections. Thanks for the opportunity =D