Quest Friends: Loell's Memory
SlavishasVoices for Commander TJ (he/him) [Age: 20s-40s]
The leader of the Angulan Knights who is a mix between a frat boy and a drill sergeant. He’s either yelling at you or laughing at mean-spirited “jokes,” likely both. (70 lines)
You see that Marv? You’ve gotta put your biceps into a proper door knock. But I suppose you need ‘em first, am I right?
What the hell kind of legendary knight is named “Loell?” (Scoffs) LO-ELL. You might as well stick with lamb-chop in that case; it won’t make history, but it’ll make a good snack! But we aren’t snacks, are we, knights!?
You did well on the mission today but you gotta learn your place in the pecking order, chickadee. We can only help the weak if there’s respect and discipline and fraternity within our organization, you got that? Don’t mess with me.
Not sure if suggestions meant general feedback or suggestions for retakes, so if it's the latter, feel free to ignore this! The transition from TJ joking to being super serious when he said "are we knights" is exactly what we wanted with that line - I would just commit to that sudden change in tone even more, and do a yell that's three times as forceful as the one in this submission.
Thanks for the feedback Deckelodeon! I'll record it first thing in the morning (almost 2AM here, so shouting is a no-no) and let you know :)