The Sea: Audiobook
kekmyabs for William "Bug" Smith
He is Black Jack's son. He is 15 years old and he is really short. He is a jumpy and energetic character. He loves adventures and anything to do with the sea. Also he has a rather high pitch voice for his age.
That story gets better and better every time you tell it, Theo. Man what I wouldn't give for a story like that! Alls I have is that I was born in the pig-pen because my mother was slopping the pigs when out I plopped, right into the mud! That's a story, but it's not exactly the kind you want to tell people.
*frightened* FINS!
I like it and the mic sounds ok to me. Only thing I would suggest was on the "fins" line is, well I guess I can give context. The ship is being attacked by a giant unseen monster. they look out into the sea to try and spot it or them and the fins of terror are giant eels as long as ten men with razor sharp fins all down their back that could slash the entire boat in half easily. it wasn't find of terror attacking but it has fins so the thought that it could be a pack or boat slicing eels would give that fins line a genuine fear and almost screaming.