This is criticism, not hate I think that the editing should be toned down, since it's just an audition and not the actual thing If you ever want to voice act and do auditions (and assuming you don't have the best equipment) you should get a decent microphone and set up. It doesn't have to be the most expensive thing, just get a microphone that works that is also in your budget. If you're on mobile, I think there is ways to make a XLR microphone or a USB mic working on Mobile, but for me I think a mobile microphone can be decent, but I would personally use it for just practicing your voice acting skills and listening back and hear what you did wrong and fix it (not saying your acting is bad, I am saying you can work on it if you want it to get better in time) Other than that, for a first time, it isn't as terrible. Some people pop the microphone a lot and have really loud or really low microphone levels at first