I really like your voice! Just a bit of feedback. The accent sounds a bit too forced, can you make the sentences flow smoother? Also, can you try putting more into the emotions rather than the accent? The first line should sound more excited/enthusiastic, the second line needs to sound bigger, more intense, and for the last line the main issue I had was that the accent sounds awkward. Thank you for sending in this audition :)
Hi, thanks for the feedback, yeah agreed it was sounding awkward while I was recording, haha its why I had dropped the accent as test at the end there. Would you like me to send a 2nd take with the tips in mind, I think I have it figured out now?
Yes, please do! If you can send in another take that'd be great ^^ Also for the last line, you can pace it out a bit more, it doesn't have to be quite as fast. Thank you!