The Angel in the forest comic dub episode 2
Manivong Boutarasy-Wilkes for Maurice
Maurice is the emotional one in his relationship with jack who is a little bit more on the gruff side. His voice can be soothing but not too soft. in the bat colony he and jack are also known for bulling Montimer who is the son of their current Alpha Mardoqueo. I would recommend NOT trying to make him sound too villainous or like the bad guy.
You're wanting to get the attention of Montimer as he is walking by
"Monti... monti... MONTIMER!"
Being a little coy you call montimer out
"Where were you? Words gone around saying you've been hanging out with a mouse"
Wanting to know more he begs a little
"Come on Montimer, are you planning on eating him later?"
I can hear a hissing noise through out. You're delivery feels stiff and not relaxed and coy. Though I do appreciate the audition but sadly not the voice were looking for. Thank you for your audition and keep at it!