The Angel in the forest comic dub episode 2
MellowDramatic for Maurice
Maurice is the emotional one in his relationship with jack who is a little bit more on the gruff side. His voice can be soothing but not too soft. in the bat colony he and jack are also known for bulling Montimer who is the son of their current Alpha Mardoqueo. I would recommend NOT trying to make him sound too villainous or like the bad guy.
You're wanting to get the attention of Montimer as he is walking by
"Monti... monti... MONTIMER!"
Being a little coy you call montimer out
"Where were you? Words gone around saying you've been hanging out with a mouse"
Wanting to know more he begs a little
"Come on Montimer, are you planning on eating him later?"
there is a lot of reverb and background noise clicks. It also sounds like you're trying not to speak too loudly, though you did take the effort to submit the audition... however that effort didn't reflect in this audition. I would also recommend to keep mumblings and things that are not in the audition lines out of your submission.