Painting for No-One Narration
brainlesslogic for The Narrator
How do I describe a narrator? Well, uhh, he or she narrates the story. Jokes aside, I'm looking for a narrator that can really set the mood for a horror story, one that can captivate anyone's interest with a voice that's inviting yet intimidating.
[The opening line. A great chance to start the story off right.]
A cold night breeze whistled into the abandoned storage garage, harmonizing perfectly with the droning taps of leaking water from the ceiling.
[You are agreeing with The Artist in a similar, devilish tone.]
The painting was indeed magnificent. All the colors used on it blended together flawlessly, making the astonishing attention to detail stand out even more.
[A moment where tension is absolutely shattered. Your tone, speed, and volume should reflect that.]
The artist jumped in front of the paralyzed man out of nowhere, causing him to shriek from not only her sudden appearance, but also her ghoulish looks.
I do like some of the diction you use on certain words (especially when talking about the painting). However, I think your overall performance was a bit too slow, and at times, you sounded really close to the mic (I recommend being about a few inches away). That said, I would love to hear your take on The Artist if you're interested. I think the tone you used in this would work really well with her character.
Thank you for that feedback! Yes I would very much love to try for The Artist. I’ll submit an audition as soon as I can!