Eeveelution Squad Comic Dub - FFS Productions
Wyster for Solarflare the Flareon
Flare is the quiet but caring younger brother of the family. He's not too afraid to say when something does upset him and will point things out to people.
Did she just call big bro her dad? -(Tips for how to do the Line) You're pretty confused as to why she thinks your older brother is her dad and what that means for that.-
Is anything wrong? -(Tips for how to do the Line) You're concerned about your sister and whether she's okay or not seeing as how she decided to try and explore an empty abandoned tree-
I think this audition is alright really. I really like your tone, you sound shy and possibly a little unsure of yourself, kind of like how I would imagine Flare would sound. The one thing that really sticks out to me is that you talk a little too fast, especially on your last sentence. I also think that you sound just a little too young for Flare, remember he is 15. So if you could possibly make you voice sound a tiny bit deeper and talk a little slower while keeping that same tone, I think it would be great. If I were you I would probably re-audition and try the advice I gave ^^;