Eeveelution Squad Comic Dub - FFS Productions
somedevfox for Solarflare the Flareon
Flare is the quiet but caring younger brother of the family. He's not too afraid to say when something does upset him and will point things out to people.
Did she just call big bro her dad? -(Tips for how to do the Line) You're pretty confused as to why she thinks your older brother is her dad and what that means for that.-
Is anything wrong? -(Tips for how to do the Line) You're concerned about your sister and whether she's okay or not seeing as how she decided to try and explore an empty abandoned tree-
I think this one is okay. I would personally like it to be a little more soft and maybe not as rough. Flare is more of a quiet and more insecure character. I would also prefer a more clear pronunciation of some words. ^^;
Oh, well, alright Vortexx, I'll try, Thanks!