Oh, you are just a treat soup! I like the laid back approach, but sometimes you have to be careful! Laidback can easily be seen as low energy! Make sure you keep that intensity spinning in the back! Your first line does this pretty well, but by the time you get to the end of the audition, there are a few spots that are questionable as to whether it is energy or low intensity, in which case neither are ideal for what I personally believe you were going for! You can also up the dynamic range of your expressions to exaggerate the energy so when you hit a low it feels low as opposed to highs being closer to your lows (however, this can change a performance direction entirely in some cases). I really liked your direction! I would probably just hammer more on the execution of it! Great work soup!