Brass & Sass (Dub)
AJLinkowsky for Victor
Victor is what we call a “brass-hole“ (hence Brass & Sass), he is very sophisticated, traditional, talented, and passionate. He is the best horn player in the band with a rough backstory. The leading male.
[thankful] “Even though the plan fell flat, I really enjoyed playing in front of everyone. Thanks for letting me do that.”
[furious] “If it wasn’t for my playing, that plan wouldn’t have even worked! Do you think just because you pasted a few posters around the school, that you fixed everything?!”
[very flustered] “Wait, why are we in my car? She’s in my car. My personal space! This is way too up close and personal. She’s too… close...”
I like your voice! Maybe try adding more pauses. Make it seemed less rushed and more natural! Other than that, you sounded great.
Thank you! I'll get right on it