Wow, this is really good if you can make the last line more close to rage this will be perfect the emotion is amazing.
Amazing! Thank you Lance. If you like, I can upload another audio file with an ABC take of the last line. Do you have a reference for which kind of rage your looking for? More of a quiet, seething rage or an anime style blow up rage with screaming and such? Or maybe something in between?
that would be great brittanie but basically matona realizes that ixa murdered roden her husband to be and matona's feelings are closed off and all she sees is rage over her fallen partner and ixa doesn't care as she is happy matona is feeling pain.