Custom Bleach Comic Dub: Arrancar Civil War Chapter 1: Into The Breach
Geeram2001 for Murte, Captain of Dante's Patrol Unit, The Four Horseman
Murte (Real Name unknown) is the leader of Dante's patrol squad, named the four horseman due to being granted special abilities by Dante via a unknown method, granting them a unique release, based on the horseman they are based on. Murte as the horseman of death, he is sly, cunning, confident in his abilities/Arrogant as well as sadistic. He is prone to outbursts of anger, especially at others' incompetence and takes fools very poorly.
(Smug, Confident)
"A strong shinigami reiatsu...was detected entering Hueco Mundo."
(Confident, slightly insulted)
"Oh...As if something like that...would take me out!"
(Smug, mocking)
"Oh...Quick thinking...Captain."
Your voice for this was near spot on for it, especially for the first line. I think for the second line though, you could of slowed down a little and probably sounded a bit more insulted to go along with the cockness, especially insulted emphasis near the end to really sell it, so in beat its like "huff...as if something like that...would take me out!" just to really sell that he is insulted by what has happened. The last line is probably the weakest of the three as it sounds like captain is split up to cap-tain and its sounds kinda awkward to listen to when there should be more dramatic pausing between the lines, so it should be more "oh...quick thinking...captain" and emphasis on the captain on the end to sound sinister. But yeah, overall, I like what I'm hearing so far
Thanks for the input. I always appreciate any feedback I can get.
your welcome :) always happy to give constructive feedback when I can :)