Custom Bleach Comic Dub: Arrancar Civil War Chapter 1: Into The Breach
Geeram2001 for Bird Hollow
The bird hollow is a minor character that Fauna uses to get into Hueco Mundo. It is shallow and a bit of a smart ass, eventually coming to its death a page later
(Shock, Surprise)
"Wha-?!"
(Formal, Mocking)
"...It's pathetic for a shinigami...to ask a hollow for help"
(Pain, Surprise, Anger)
"Urk...You...!"
Thanks for the audition. The first line I don't think works and its because its missing that surprised stutter near the beginning since the line reads as "wha-what?!" although it kinda fits that you sound like your squaking since this is a bird hollow, so its alright, but not entirely sold on it. The second line is probably the best of the three since I definitely get the cocky/smug ass sound to it, although it could sound more smart ass, almost bratty in a way. The third line doesn't work for me as this is the hollow after his neck has been slashed, so the urk should be the reaction of his neck being severed and probably more shock and surprise in the voice for the "you..." before disappearing completely