I actually quite like your voice for her; I feel in terms of what I asked for, it's pretty good, although a few concerns I have is that a lot of it/pretty much all of it is said too quickly for my taste as a lot of the lines should have a more, slower and more dramatic tone to them. True, this might be because of lack of context for the scene and so on, but with the first example line, I think if you said it slowly and built up through it as this is someone who is basically vowing to kill this monster that killed those under her care. The second example line, again, it was said too quickly and I think if you said it slowly and really went into a more "calm yet if you even so much as make a single move against me, your dead" sort of tone, it would of worked much better. True, the last example line actually works with how quickly you said it as she's just been taken by surprise and has little time to react, so in context, this makes sense, but I don't feel like the other two lines being spoken so quick works since it doesn't quite work, but to be honest, I feel like the spirit's there, I think this is more the execution of it, which could be worked on either over other takes in solo or if preferred/if you're interested, could be done over a call for live recording or more so I'm able to give (at least hopefully) better direction for the lines, but yeah, so far, I'm fairly impressed, good job