Hello Adriana, thanks for auditioning. You have a unique voice and I like that. Just some tips: make sure when recording, the device you’re using is still, so that there’s no weird noises. Also, practice breathing and pausing so you don’t sound rushed. Take time to understand the character and what they’re trying to express. This fanfic is based on a game, so looking up a video of the character might help. I hope you will consider a retake. I look forward to hearing back from you.