Heyyy , Your audition was amazing , but a want to give my Opinion , In the "W-what do y-you mean by that ?" part , I think you need to make that a scream and shock at the same time , like your are widen and a bit bold and strong voice at the same time, like make it sound deep , if you get it . so Yeah , only that , But Keep up the good work , Good luck to you ^^ You can try audition more than one character if you want ^^