So that was a really good run through. One thing I might suggest is to slow down a bit on your line and really let your body tell you when to add in little noises to seal the part. You are excited you might try a giggle. Second note on a more practical level I didn't see the second line anywhere. Also while I do appreciate the introduction make sure to read the instructions beforehand. We mention not to slate beforehand. Its not a big deal by any means but just make sure too look at the description with that. I don't want it to come off as mean just trying to provide as much constructive feedback as possible.