No one in Merciful Blvd wants to believe the things that she's seeing in Merciful Blvd; Knows what Nightmare and his gang are planning to destroy the place; The only people that believe her are the people who've been treated badly by Nightmare (Dust Sans and Scar) She sounds like somewhere around 12-15 in age-sounding, and not too much of a high pitch, but somewhere in the middle ya know? 

Make all scenes dramatic and follow the brackets [ ]s!