Dude your voice is freaking perfect. The only issue is the audio quality. The white noise is really loud and almost drowns out your voice, and the microphone doesn't sound all that great either. I would hate to see you overlooked because of that. Since your voice is so good. I would recommend buying a microphone for a laptop (You can get a good quality one for between $40 and $60 dollars.) And make sure to record with an audio software that has a white noise remover (audacity has one of those and it's free.) Finally, mixing the audio is very important, making sure everything is leveled properly and your mic doesn't peak. If you need any advice on microphone options/recording environment. I recommend CdawgVa, he's pretty knowledgable when it comes to this stuff. I hope this helps.