I absolutely love this voice. My only critique is that the ending is not as emotive as I'd like. During this part in the game, he really goes all out! I suggest listening to the PS3 voice patch version of that furnace scene, the acting is really immaculate and might be able to better explain than I can. If you wouldn't mind, also, may I have your discord? You can PM it if you'd like :D
I appreciate the honest feedback a lot tbh! Only thing I can say is that I was trying to keep myself from overacting the last bit away from how Kanon would be in that moment since I do have a habit to break it when emoting as he did in that moment.