Future Diary of a Wimpy Kid (Future Diary Abridged)
themasterfulnerd for Yukiteru Amano
The protagonist of this abridged episode. Yuki is a coward who is just trying to get through his day while avoiding the advances of your normal, everyday stalker. He is thrown into a death game unknowingly where he uses his phone to predict the future to get an advantage over his opponents. The problem is, every participant has a power like that!
We are looking for a cowardly/socially-awkward type of tone for him.
P.S. It's cause-ality, guys.
(Realizing, then stupidly happy) Wait a second I have the powers of causality at my whim… What should I do with it? CHEAT AT MATH!! YAY!!!!
(Running away, terrified) A hot girl is chasing me! I can’t believe that 4chan chain post was right! The hottest girl in school is trying to kill me with calculus!
So I loved the improv. That's really an important skill to have with this kind of project. However I think you may have been better to deliver one line of each straight as the line was written. But excellent job in that regard. One other note it doesn't sound like you are running from someone who is potentially trying to kill you so I think some more breathing and frantic/tension in your voice would be better.
Thank you for the compliments and advice! I agree the running bit should have been much more panicked sounding. Also, I didn't even realize I had cut all the read-throughs where I did the line straight (That's my bad lol) Once again thank you for taking your time to listen, and I hope you have a great day!
Yeah absolutely. Good luck friend!