Future Diary of a Wimpy Kid (Future Diary Abridged)
JamesP1993 for Yukiteru Amano
The protagonist of this abridged episode. Yuki is a coward who is just trying to get through his day while avoiding the advances of your normal, everyday stalker. He is thrown into a death game unknowingly where he uses his phone to predict the future to get an advantage over his opponents. The problem is, every participant has a power like that!
We are looking for a cowardly/socially-awkward type of tone for him.
P.S. It's cause-ality, guys.
(Realizing, then stupidly happy) Wait a second I have the powers of causality at my whim… What should I do with it? CHEAT AT MATH!! YAY!!!!
(Running away, terrified) A hot girl is chasing me! I can’t believe that 4chan chain post was right! The hottest girl in school is trying to kill me with calculus!
So one thing I will mention is that the 2nd line didnt feel like you were running from someone potentially trying to kill you. You need to add in some heavy breathing and panting to get the extra vibe going on. For your first line it didnt feel like he was contemplating on the power he had been given. Also is english a 2nd language for you?
yeah I know, I messed up. I decided to try nonetheless despite knowing it wasn't going to be okay. sorry.
I dont blame you. I audition for things outside of my wheelhouse as well. How else are we going to improve otherwise?