Future Diary of a Wimpy Kid (Future Diary Abridged)
Zelrata for Yukiteru Amano
The protagonist of this abridged episode. Yuki is a coward who is just trying to get through his day while avoiding the advances of your normal, everyday stalker. He is thrown into a death game unknowingly where he uses his phone to predict the future to get an advantage over his opponents. The problem is, every participant has a power like that!
We are looking for a cowardly/socially-awkward type of tone for him.
P.S. It's cause-ality, guys.
(Realizing, then stupidly happy) Wait a second I have the powers of causality at my whim… What should I do with it? CHEAT AT MATH!! YAY!!!!
(Running away, terrified) A hot girl is chasing me! I can’t believe that 4chan chain post was right! The hottest girl in school is trying to kill me with calculus!
[Z][E][L]#0572
So note, it's very echoey where you are recording which doesn't sound super great. I want to hear you and not your room. I do like the energy that you bring especially on the "yays" However your lines were pretty well delivered the same way on both takes. Try to vary up your takes otherwise you are better off just having one take.
Thank you for the feedback!