Future Diary of a Wimpy Kid (Future Diary Abridged)
TheSSGCorrin for Yukiteru Amano
The protagonist of this abridged episode. Yuki is a coward who is just trying to get through his day while avoiding the advances of your normal, everyday stalker. He is thrown into a death game unknowingly where he uses his phone to predict the future to get an advantage over his opponents. The problem is, every participant has a power like that!
We are looking for a cowardly/socially-awkward type of tone for him.
P.S. It's cause-ality, guys.
(Realizing, then stupidly happy) Wait a second I have the powers of causality at my whim… What should I do with it? CHEAT AT MATH!! YAY!!!!
(Running away, terrified) A hot girl is chasing me! I can’t believe that 4chan chain post was right! The hottest girl in school is trying to kill me with calculus!
So I think you may want to slow down your speaking especially with the first line. I cant get as much emotion but of it. Also when your running he sounds very reasonable which would be good in a more normal situation however the fact that hes talking about that absurd situation I think should set off his confusion a bit more.
Thanks for the feedback! If you'd like, I can do a retake if you wouldn't mind
Absolutely I will do my best to give feedback.