MLP Fanfiction Audiobook: "Mythic Dawn" by MagnetBolt
Oral Spice for Tanzen
An overtly evil diamond dog. Greedy and scheming, but not actually nearly clever enough to back up his ambition.
Appears in chapter 4.
[“Trade with ponies,” Berlioz said.]
“Like parents of stupid tiny dog who spends too much time in the sun?” Tanzen laughed. “Ponies are not friends. They do not care about dogs!”
“Chief is weak,” Tanzen shrugged. “Berlioz is here now too, with pony slave. Berlioz is smart enough to know where strength is, yes?” Tanzen grinned, showing sharp teeth. “Ponies are weak.”
“No,” Tanzen scoffed. “Dogs all stupid. Tanzen go to tribe say we can finally get what we want, can finally have the respect and fear we deserve but no! Chief say Tanzen wrong! He knows nothing! He not smart like you and Tanzen.”
Your pacing is good, but the "low and menacing" tone doesn't quite fit the character. That said, I do like your voice - would it be okay if I pinged you if a role that would fit it comes up in future projects?
Yes, that would be great!