I listened to the audition and while the voice was slightly monotone, it was good. Thanks for that. However, the biggest problem you have is how quiet it is and that you somehow only recorded the left side of your audio or panned to the left. Even with my headphones on at 100 percent volume, I could barely hear you. I had to edit it to actually hear the lines. While it can be worked on to fix the problems, there might be a chance down the line that your auditions will be critiqued because of them. Although it isn't too hard for you to fix it.
Thanks for the tips man! I'm very new at this and it's a new mic so I'm still working it out. Definitely something I'll be working on!