Thanks so much for submitting an audition! I honestly can't give any direction in terms of acting. It sounded good. The only thing I recommend is learning how to record better so you don't sound so quiet. Not that it negatively effected you because I was able to amplify and clean the audio. However even though I'm not a professional in any way, I don't know if others know how to do the same. So If your know how to use a gain/sensitivity dial on your mic or equipment, I suggest increasing a bit (from where it is right now) for speaking parts and then lowering it for louder lines. But other than that, I plugged in your lines for a test run in the video and it sounded good.
Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it. I'm still in the process of trying to find a nice "normal" setting for the mixer. If you'd like, I can try re-recording and putting it up as another audition. *Edit* Nvm. Found the "normal"
Yeah totally if you want to retry with better audio, you sure can. And congrats on finding the normal haha. I still have trouble with gain on my mic although I can't say that I'm really someone who voice acts so I haven't really went through that process.