LEADING ROLES OPEN Fantasy Novel AUDIOBOOK; ongoing project part 3/19
ModestCock for WRITING EDITOR'S HELP NEEDED
Hello there, good people.
For this project I am looking for an English native speaker, who would read the Chapters before I send them to the voice actors.
I wrote the book in Polish and I'm translating it chapter by chapter. I study Translations and I realise how hard it is to master the language completely. I use various dictionaries and corpora to do it thoroughly, but nothing can replace the native speaker's intuition.
I need someone who would read the chapters and let me know if everything is understandable and neat or if the metaphors are well-used.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1gz7ACkh04XQl3wwlU0HDEucmD-HJNnv1 - Here is Chapter 2. If you're interested, you can see if the text is alright and if it requires a lot of corrections.
Thank you in advance.
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