Fire Emblem: Fates Death Scene Dubs (LARGE SPOILERS)
jonjon for Ryoma
If you could also add in some grunts of pain, that would be great! (Not really great for the character, but you get what I mean.)
Original voice for reference:
"I cannot fall into the hands of an enemy, so I..." (Proudly)
(Grunt) "Fulfill a samurai's...." (Breathing heavily) "final duty!" (Moan as though you are being split in two.)
"I'm counting...on you." (Gruffly breathing out a smirk before letting the air leave your throat.)
Great pain grunts! The only thing I'd like a bit more about it is if it was a bit more forced. He's making a declaration to everyone around him that he is killing himself to honor his duty as a samurai. Overall, though, great audition.
lol your right ill re do it thanks for the feed back
No problem! Thanks for listening to my feedback; I always feel people are going to get angry for me critiquing their auditions even if it is for my own project.
XDDD to be a voice actor is to take direction and criticism and put your hart and soul into what you do at lest that's what I think ill be sending the re do rely soon
Thank you!