MLP Fanfiction Audiobook: "Mythic Dawn" by MagnetBolt

Z-Master47 for Narrator

Voice Actor
Voice Actor
Narrator
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Role assigned to: Blake Dunkak

The narrator is probably the most challenging part of the story, both because of the volume, but also because the narrator is responsible for setting the mood and pacing of the story. They will need to go from expository to casual to somber, to funny to actionny and so on, and not uncommonly switch the tone in the middle of a paragraph.

  • Luster Dawn was the personal student of Princess Twilight Sparkle, and she was sure of exactly three things. First, that her mentor was the greatest hero who had ever lived. Second, that Prench was just Neightalian with extra vowels sprinkled onto it to make it fancy. Third, that today was the day she was going to go on her own adventure.

  • Much later, after happy reunions, a quick trip to the hospital, and being chewed out by Principal Starlight for doing something so dangerous, Berlioz was outside, and mostly alone.

    He took the rock out of his pocket.

    He looked at it for a while, then put it down where it could see the stars and sat with it in silence for a long time.

    Berlioz wasn’t a stone shaman. He wasn’t a fighter. Neither of those were what his tribe needed. His tribe needed someone who could make friends.

  • The standing stones had been decorated with red and gold cloth, and fires were burning in bronze braziers forming a circle around the site. It was almost like a second festival happening out in the middle of nowhere, complete with revelers who were working around the six largest stones, carving something into them with hammers and chisels. So maybe less like a party and more like a job site with extra decor and everypony dressed in robes and masks.

Z-Master47
MLP Fanfiction Audiobook: "Mythic Dawn" by MagnetBolt
Quinch
Quinch

Not bad! I'll keep you posted. For criticism, I might suggest putting in a bit more energy into the reading - you speak clearly and not monotonously, but you sound a bit like you're holding back. Here's a quick recording of what I might think the narrator would sound - https://voca.ro/cHPutMKu8MX . If you want to take another pass, give it a try!

    Z-Master47
    Z-Master47

    Thanks for the feedback!:D I'll do it again and try to give it a bit more energy

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