If Leeches Ate Peaches - one-shot radio drama/podcast
tal for Nurse (Chloe)
Chloe is one of the few nurses who are sympathetic to Annabelle's plight, allowing her to keep 'contraband' items in order to keep her happiness (and sanity) up. She is fairly new to the nursing gig, and can be quite nervous and apologetic, but at the end of the day just wants to do her job right.
Voice notes:
Pitch - no preference
Accent - North American
(flustered, apologetic) What have you brought? Okay, one second. Let me just check with my supervisor… Sorry about this, it's just - well, it's ward policy...!
(kind, gentle) You’ll be okay. I’ll keep your things safe for you, don’t worry.
(apologetic, hasty.) Ah, but – I mean… No pens. Nothing you can hurt yourself with.
You've got a really good handle on how flustered and awkward she is, all your takes on the first line were really great in particular! If possible, I'd love to see a bit more of a shift in tone on line 2 - I like that you're keeping her underlying awkwardness, but would really like if you could try and make it a bit softer, slower, more reassuring - this is a moment where she's really showing her good side as a nurse, and is genuinely trying to be kind, so it would be great if you'd be up to recording just that line again with that in mind :)