Nice audition. Main focus of feedback: Louder! Line 2, he is announcing this to a massive audience. You had the evil tone down however it just needed a little more energy. If you want to send new lines in with this feedback, send them to my skype: TechV.A
Oh yeah, its been some time since i have watched book one and kinda forgot some of the context around the lines. Thanks for the feed back and sure ^_^ i'll add you know