The Legend of Korra: Book 1
salimbo for Mako
Main Character
Fire bender, brother to Bolin, one third of the Fire Ferrets pro bending team. Quite isolated from others, doesn't show his emotions easily, quite straight forward. Grew up on the streets as an orphan with his brother, does his best to keep his brother out of trouble.
Voice Type: Medium Male. Any accent. Straight forward and unemotional. Cautious.
[Do whatever lines you feel would be best to show your talent and range as a voice actor in playing this character.]
*Psst* Bolin. I told you, you have to stop bringing your crazy fan girls in here before the matches. Get her out of here. [pause] You're the Avatar, and I'm an idiot. *sigh*
How could you not see me? I mean I was ju..juu....uh I was..I..I.Wow. *Ahem* That was *ahem* [pause] Don't worry, I'm fine. My brother hits me harder than that everyday in practice. [pause] Yeah, that's me.
Nice audition! I noticed you missed out line 1. Sorry if it wasn't clear enough but you should just pick any lines the character has in the first series and put them before line 2. Anyway, I liked it. Way to improve would be to speak a little louder, even though he is a little more reserved than most characters, he still has just a little more emphasis on his lines. Line 3, he has just got hit by a moped. Feels really angry, then get's startled by how beautiful the woman who ran him over looks. Try to make this a little more comedic, nice one though!
Thanks, I'll be able to improve on the points as those aren't major flaws.