Nice audition! I noticed you missed out line 1. Sorry if it wasn't clear enough but you should just pick any lines the character has in the first series and put them before line 2. Anyway, I liked it. Way to improve would be to speak a little louder, even though he is a little more reserved than most characters, he still has just a little more emphasis on his lines. Line 3, he has just got hit by a moped. Feels really angry, then get's startled by how beautiful the woman who ran him over looks. Try to make this a little more comedic, nice one though!