Your Turn To Die/Kimi Ga Shine Game Fandub
Nathan Chaw for Shunsuke Hayasaka
Hayasaka is a rather anxious and submissive man that periodically speaks in a stutter, usually accompanied by nervous laughter. Afraid of the monsters that come to attack, he does his best to help fend them off with the others. His kindness and humanity is expressed with how distraught he is when Gin risks his life to save him; considering as a Dummy, his life isn't destructible. Mid voice that's awkward and shy.
Just think about it... I'm not the real Hayasaka. I'm a doll made to look exactly like him.
The way you said, "I'm not the real Hayasaka" is close to what I was picturing. You can hear the anxiety in that line very well. The rest of the line would need a bit of work to keep the same tone but overall a nice take on Hayasaka.
Alright i will take note of that and try again