Book #1 Audio
Mel Valentine for Narrator
This is reading all of the explanations and action that goes on from a 3rd person POV. The key point to make about this role is that the narrator is "slow" speaking and precise with each word, as if truly telling the story to an audience. When in moments of intense action, the "reader" may be reading the text faster, and therefore you should be a bit faster. When describing what something looked like, speak as though the reader has never seen this object before.
The movement of the van made her nauseous, but Kamela forced herself not to be sick. When the van came to a stop, the door opened and Darius climbed in the back. He straddled Kamela’s body and sat on top of her. She grunted with the amount of weight that was on top of her abdomen.
Blade grabbed James and held around his neck until James stopped moving. He collapsed and remained still. Fearing that James had been killed, she fought her hardest to get to him. Kamela bit and scratched at the fat man, but did not succeed in getting past him.
Suddenly, there was the sound of a key in the lock of the door. Kamela rolled over and hid behind the bed. The door opened with a creak and slammed shut. Then silence. No footsteps. No breathing. Kamela wanted to see who had come in, but forced herself to remain hidden. Just then, the room filled with a roaring laughter. She turned her head to the left, finding the source of the sound. Darius. Kamela looked over to find him peering at her from the base of the bed.
Your rhythm is good. Voice is clear. I appreciate the emphasis you place on some words such as "grunted."