Hi Irisdragon! Thank you for auditioning! You have a great range of expressions and I love it! :) Here are a few thoughts I had while listening to your audition: 1. You're recording at a low level for the conversational stuff. I'd recommend setting a proper level for the conversational stuff, and setting the level again for the yell-y stuff later. 2. I'd like you to read through the comments I've left on other people's auditions and find the ones that talk about the first six sentences being separate contexts, as it applies to you. 3. I noticed you didn't record any reax. Is there a reason for this? 4. The explosive yell-y stuff at the end needs to have more energy behind it. Taking a look at the manga, the level-10 energy level, and the context in which she says this line, is abundantly clear that it should be a high-energy, big big expression. :) I hope these comments are helpful to you. Good luck!
