Hi Meta Maddie! Thank you for the audition! Here are a few thoughts that came to me while listening to your audition: 1. Your recording level is too low for the conversational parts. Generally speaking, you'd want to aim for a gain level that lands the peaks of your waveforms around -6dbs for these kinds of auditions. Then as you get to the loud parts, you'd want to adjust your gain again appropriately. Does this make sense? 2. Thank you for reading the material and understanding the context before recording. It's evidenced by the voice acting and that puts you in the competition. At the same time, the voice I'm hearing is slightly too young - I think it's a pretty good fit, but there are a couple of moments where I go 'that doesn't sound like her' - I'd generally bump up the "maturity" of the voice delivery overall and see where it leads. 3. Most of the audition lines are THOUGHTS. I'd like you to look through the comments I've left on other auditions and read about differentiating a speech delivery and thought delivery. -- I hope these are helpful to you. Thank you very much for auditioning!
Thank you so much for the feedback! Should I try to squeeze in another take tonight or will you be short listing and holding a second round?