Haha hi and thank you for the second audition! Indeed, MUCH closer to what I'm looking for! I can really feel the shift in your emotion during those first six lines, that was great! You don't have to re-audition, but I'd also advise you to not break up the sentences like "he... drives me home" - putting the emotion in the pause is a good tool to have, but you also need to provide options for the editor. I would include that read as well as one where you don't pause in between. Especially because you did this multiple times in multiple sentences. :)
Good to know, I will definitely keep that in mind. Thanks again so much for the feedback!